The Kirby-Liner Working Criteria for Good Student Writing

            From Inside Out-Developmental Strategies in Teaching Writing

                        Dan Kirby and Tom Liner

            Presented at the North Florida Writing Project (Florida State University)

 

Good Writing is Interesting

 

1. Voice                                   One human being talking to another

                                                Makes the reader believe

                                                Strong, recognizable imprint of the writer

2. Movement                            Words building/ pull the reader along

                                                It goes somewhere with variety

                                                A sense of order

3. Light touch                           Writer doesn’t take himself/herself too seriously

                                                Even-tempered

4. Informative                           Important

                                                Has substance/says something

                                                Adds to our experience

5. Inventive                               Unique experience

                                                Something new/ or something old in a new way

 

Good Writing is Technically Skillful

 

6. Sense of detail                      Makes contact with the reader

                                                Anticipates reader’s needs

                                                Compliments the reader with meaning

7. Detail                                   Concrete

                                                Photographic

                                                Selective

                                                Words that put the reader there

8. Rhythm                                 Words that sing

                                                Sounds effortless

9. Form                                    How it looks on the page

                                                What it looks like in print

10. Mechanics                          Observes conventions of spelling, punctuation, usage

                                                Enlightened control

 

There are two main attributes of good writing, to which all other qualities are related. Good writing is interesting to read, and good writing is written with technical skill.